pg 21

September 12th, 2013, 5:01 pm

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Reply Theorah, September 12th, 2013, 5:01 pm

Archie makes a thorough assessment before making friends :3

Hey, would anyone like to give some input?
We were wondering what you guys thought of the narration? Is it confusing to follow who is saying what? Does it mess with the pacing/feel a bit overwhelming? Or do you guys find it reads okay?

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Reply Theorah, September 12th, 2013, 5:25 pm

Oh and apologies for the size of the page, I think its at a different dpi, I ttly assumed I put all my pages at 600, but maybe not 0_o *worst memory ever*

Reply Theorah, September 19th, 2013, 2:59 pm

@Oakmint @JammyScribbler @mistrali thanks so much for your input guys, it was really helpful! ^_^

@AmiC Thanks for your input! :D And lol yeah, Archie is asexual, so hes likely to only look as far as the neck haha

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Reply Oakmint, September 12th, 2013, 7:25 pm

I see no problem with the narration. :)

Reply JammyScribbler, September 13th, 2013, 4:44 am

I don't think it's a problem at all, but it might get confusing if there were two characters doing it at once on the same page. if there's only one character doing it at any one time it's pretty easy to keep up with it, and it adds an extra layer to the comic C:

Reply AmiC, September 13th, 2013, 4:54 am

I've been reading each new page as it comes out, so the narration has'nt been a problem. Just to be sure though i've re-read all the pages from the start. No problem at all. It all flows well and its clear from the placing of the narration box who is thinking what.
Personally, i like seeing inside a characters head, though its obvious we wont get all the answers were looking for yet...that'd be no fun! ^o^
P.S. the level of Archie's gaze is refreshing.:p

Reply mistrali (Guest), September 14th, 2013, 6:24 pm

I don't think it's a problem at all!

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